ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
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Description
something just isn't working
Image size
1600x1200px 788.56 KB
Make
Samsung Electronics
Model
SGH-T559
Date Taken
Sep 27, 2010, 2:13:51 PM
Comments9
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Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
First off, I am going to explain my rating:
Vision: It seems like a take on an older painting.
Originality: Cutting and self-harm seems like a popular topic lately.
Technique: I don't know how you created the cuts, so I'll have to base it on the rest of the setup.
Impact: Didn't really phase me, as I've seen similar items already in the photography categories.
First off the backdrop\table:
It seems too orderly for someone with an artistic block. I mean, it looks like you grabbed an old pallet, let some paint dry and splattered some water on it.
The easel: Seems alright, a semi-decent painting of a building. Just seems too obvious, as if you wanted it to be noticed right away.
The water cup: Same as the pallet.
Now the arm: It seems a bit too busy. I mean, you're causing the viewer to see the jewelry, then the cuts and then back at the jewelry and nails... It's a vicious circle.
The cuts: They seem too planned...
Too many cuts, not enough blood and the color doesn't change. I mean, there should be some darker, some lighter...etc
All in all, I would say good attempt.
It gives the feeling of frustration.